good. but Couldnt it be : Sunshine, I bring with me ? :)

Oye. Good start. :D There is a poet emerging. Loved the short syllables of the second line. Keep up singeri!

Thnks sriram, but by sunshine, i meant radiance---of happiness,ofcourse..which i do bring, but more so ever, as a part of me. So i dint mind mentioning Sunshine..as mine :)

thnka ton dheepi.. jus a try :)

Hi Ron .....
thats was too good ..... sorry fa the late comment i was not here ....... keep it up ......